I was doing an observation of a pupil in a Y10 class today when I became distracted by the English lesson content. It was about writing a story in one line. The example given was:
He was alone in the dark. When he put out his hand , a box of matches were put into it.
I tried to think of another example.
'Hurtling down into the darkness, she saw a pair of yellow eyes pass before blackness descended.'
or,
'Hell ,' said the duchess as she fell over backwards off the tower. When they looked over she had gone. '
Any more ideas ? Suzi
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